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[Bubble Tanks 2]

Good game

I thought it was pretty fun, but i didn't enjoy the loss system forcing you back into weaker tanks. I'm fine with losing bubbles, but you should not be able to lose more than your state and revert back >.<

I got to my fifth tank state and was fine, until i got swamped with the poison slowing bubbles, and when i couldn't move i kept getting bludgeoned until i was back to my 1st state >_>

HeroInteractive responds:

It's very subtle, but the game will help you get back up to where you were VERY fast. Don't believe me? Get up to the third tank state or something, and then lose all your bubbles. I think you'll be very surprised with how quickly you are up to the third tier again- it may even only take you 1 bubblefield to get there.

[Song Stages]

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It was pretty fun, but i couldn't get past the "memory" part. it sounds like 7 notes, and i swear i copied it at least twice, but i never beat it. You should put in a bar or something that shows if you hit the right one, and every time you hit a wrong one it resets so that you know what your doing >_<

Petwoip responds:

If you need the code please PM me.

[F2Jam v3]

O.O

Holy Geez!
So.. many.. buttons... T.T
AWESOME game, but i can't controll that many buttons and watch, what i'm doing lol.

XceeD responds:

xD! Thanks for the review. I understand how you feel. The first time I played O2Jam, I felt the exact same way xD!

[Quiz of Random Knowlege]

uhmm..

It was okay, not the best, but you made one mistake; a sociopath isn't a criminal, it's someone that believes that they are the only one in the world that matters.

popsicle-of-doom responds:

I don't know I thought a sociopath was someone that does something society doesn't accept which includes being a criminal.

[String Avoider 2]

Pretty fun.

It was a little bit hard on some of the really tight spots and corners, but not too bad. And i got confused when i died a few times cuz i didn't realize that the back of your string movesdifferently than the exact path you take, so blargh. lol.
I think it would be cooler if you added more color options, and an option to use a key board or mouse.
(also, for some reason when i changed the wall color, they didn't change, but the string did, so iono.)

fwe responds:

Yeah, that's what makes the challenge. It would be far too easy if the string just followed the path you took. Just like any other avoid game. The reason for the wall not changing is that the level is rendered once, so it will only change in the next level, whereas the string will change when you die and make a new one. Thanks for the review!

[Orb Avoidance]

Swoot

Fun game!
I think you should add an option to turn of the sound though, and fix the error in your rules; it say to only avaoid gray blocks and red balls. It doesn't say u need to avoid Purple/blue/etc. balls, which also kill you >_<

Kalinium responds:

Ah, well spotted. Thanks, I'll look into fixing that.

[The Elevator (DEMO)]

Simple.

The game itself is far too simple. There's no time limit, all you do is move a platform, and avoid the fire which is porly made because even if you miss it it says you hit it.
Maybe if it's improved much it'll be fun, but for now it's e...z.

camoshark responds:

lol, I get that for the fire a lot...
anyways, ill try to improve.

[Valley of DEATH]

haha. awesome game.

It's pretty simple, but great for killing time, or killing boredom lol. The only thing i can suggest is to maybe make the guy jump higher, make his color changable, and add more "valleys"

Carpo-ink responds:

Hehe, thanks.I'll make a sequel next time with "valleys" like "valley of DOOM" or something like that XD

[Space Shootout]

a work in progress

It's pretty good game. I like the enemy types, the boss is fun, and the random asteroid belt thing is fun fun.
Some of the things to think about;
-more power up., I only saw one laser power up the whole game, was that rly it? cuz that is handy, but once u die, it's gone T_T
(also mabie if you get two lasor ups, it becomes 5 instead of 3, etc.
-more types of power ups. Maybe make stronger lasors, faster laser (definitely), sheild, etc.
-Maybe make the screen a little bigger, or the characters smaller, cuz it feels a little cramped in the game.
-make the up grade indestructable!!!! i accidently killed all the upgrades my first run through thinking they were enemies lol
---and most importantly, ADD more levels lol

ChilliDog responds:

Thanks for playing it the whole way through! :D

Yea, I'm working on more powerups as we speak, that's the main thing that's going to be added. I'll also make it bigger. The screen was small due to the site I was originally submitting to.

Ah yes! Shooting the upgrades, I noticed that and forgot to fix it!!! Ahh, thanks for reminding me.

More levels will be added as well.

Thanks for your great review! :D